
Early pirated scripts reveal how revision deepens dramatic depth
Shakespeare revised his original drafts not merely to fix errors, but to expand character motivation and emotional weight. A comparison of the 1597 pirated Quarto with the 1599 authorized Quarto shows significant expansion in dialogue between Friar Laurence and the lovers. The earlier text presents blunt, hurried exchanges, whereas the revised edition adds rich poetic metaphors that define their tragic mindsets.
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